BK Akitas Wrote:I'm sure his proofreader was busily checking terminology and dates to keep the timeline continuity along with fixing typos from everything I can find, mobile and cell were both in use at the time, and I distinctly recall using the terms interchangeably. yeah, I'm old........ Predator 2 though? good catch..about a month off. can't catch 'em all I guess.
In my first post I asked if Paul had a new proof-reader because it really did show. I didn't know it was you. Great job I didn't see a single typo which is a major improvement over previous Gauntlet editions. Again I haven't got the last few but had planned on getting them. It's always been worth the payoff to read the Gauntlets before the Tor's come out but it's a little frustrating to spend $60 on a collectors edition and see that many mistakes. Predator 2 is one that is easy enough to give a pass to, Jack is in a slightly different reality from ours where it opened as a summer movie.
At least they didn't make a date to go see the new John Hughes movie
BK Akitas Wrote:there's references throughout the series to Jack's love of the big screen so skipping a tv isn't out of character. eventually he gets one- and a load of golden oak Victorian furniture -but failing to buy a tv in his crummy itty bitty city apartment seems right for him. isn't a movie theater his "preferred method of oblivion" anyway?
Agreed on his preferred method.... but Jack is from the video generation. When we first meet him he is watching a James Whale marathon on Betamax/Laserdisc/ or DVD depending on the release date of the first book. He also has a friend in one of the early books he networks with by exchanging rare out of print movies with. It's a pre-established characteristic of his that ended up disappearing in the books once the "otherness" took over. While he's landscaping I can see him getting by without one, but once he starts making all that money that he doesn't know what to do with I'd think he'd want one of the top of the line laserdisc players that even flipped the disc over. I mean it is 1990 right? What is he a savage? To me it does seem out of character, he's already a movie geek by this point as referenced by him mentioning Der Golem...
BK Akitas Wrote:I'm not sure how much sooner it could be mentioned Jack didn't have his own phone... ?
It wasn't that it wasn't established sooner. It was. It's just that after it's established that Jack doesn't have a phone he leaves his phone number with the guy making his "Lonnie" id. .... Later on it's established that the number is to a phone in the hallway of his apartment. When Jack gives out the number it should've been mentioned that it was to a communial phone and to just leave a message for Jack.
BK Akitas Wrote:can't wait to get my copy
kind of on topic- I saw a reference in Vince Flynn's most recent Mitch Rapp prequel (Kill Shot) to the "latest" technology, a star tac! laughed my head off, I remember getting one back in the day
Hopefully soon for you then. Again it's a great book. The nits I bring up are only slight and minor. So thank you again Paul and also a big thank you to the proof-reader(s) for their work.... Because it really shows by not showing
. The character debate is interesting though. After more people read it it'll be interesting to see if they view Jack with the start of a video collection in 1990 once he's come into some money or if they feel that he wouldn't buy a tv until later.