jerrund   04-03-2012, 03:54 PM
#1
Were either "The Keep" or "The Tomb" revised for the most recent (trade paper) version? Thanks
Marc   04-03-2012, 04:28 PM
#2
I believe only The Tomb is, but it was more just clean up revisions. Nothing substantial was added.
Damin J. Toell   04-03-2012, 09:42 PM
#3
THE KEEP also had some tidying up. I believe FPW posted that he came across some 30-year old errors that had evaded correction.

Edited to add: on 11/8/10, FPW posted on the boards that the latest edition of THE KEEP just had "[m]aybe a few turns of phrase and shading in dialogue, but nothing of much consequence." See http://www.repairmanjack.com/forum/showt...post263304

Edited further to add: on 4/11/10, FPW sez: "No appreciable difference in The Keep for the average reader. I tweaked the prose a little, killing some passive voice, etc. Not much beyond that." See http://www.repairmanjack.com/forum/showt...post248866
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