THE KEEP also had some tidying up. I believe FPW posted that he came across some 30-year old errors that had evaded correction.
Edited to add: on 11/8/10, FPW posted on the boards that the latest edition of THE KEEP just had "[m]aybe a few turns of phrase and shading in dialogue, but nothing of much consequence." See
http://www.repairmanjack.com/forum/showt...post263304
Edited further to add: on 4/11/10, FPW sez: "No appreciable difference in The Keep for the average reader. I tweaked the prose a little, killing some passive voice, etc. Not much beyond that." See
http://www.repairmanjack.com/forum/showt...post248866