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Barry Lee Dejasu   07-24-2010, 07:49 AM
#1
Almost done with Fatal Error. And, as Maxwell Smart would have it, llllllloving it.

This should be a fairly
S P O I L E R -free post, but there may be enough hints of what's to come to consider it worth the warning.

On page 248 of the Gauntlet HC, Jack, Weezy, Veilleur, and the Lady are discussing strategies, tactics, the Otherness, the q'qr, and of course, the One. It just sort of jumped out at me, because sometimes when I'm alone, I'll read books aloud (helps me sink more deeply into them); but, whenever I see a certain R-fellow's name, I don't say out out loud. That said...there's a time Jack is talking:
[INDENT]" 'The big question, as I see it, is why is a baby q'qr so important? I mean, important enough for Rasalom himself to keep--"
[/INDENT]Whoah-whoah-whoah, time out! Jack? Aw, come on! :mad2: Since when does HE get to drop the One's name without...consequence? (And since nobody in the room stopped him from saying it, my guess is this truly was just an error...and hopefully not a Fatal one.)

Just something to keep in mind for the trade edits, FP. (Nice as always to see you again, by the way!)

"...and your last thought is that you have become a noise...a thin, nameless noise among all these others...howling in the empty dark room"
--Ulver, "Nowhere/Catastrophe"
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Bluesman Mike Lindner   07-24-2010, 09:07 AM
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Barry Lee Dejasu Wrote:Almost done with Fatal Error. And, as Maxwell Smart would have it, llllllloving it.

This should be a fairly
S P O I L E R -free post, but there may be enough hints of what's to come to consider it worth the warning.

On page 248 of the Gauntlet HC, Jack, Weezy, Veilleur, and the Lady are discussing strategies, tactics, the Otherness, the q'qr, and of course, the One. It just sort of jumped out at me, because sometimes when I'm alone, I'll read books aloud (helps me sink more deeply into them); but, whenever I see a certain R-fellow's name, I don't say out out loud. That said...there's a time Jack is talking:
[INDENT]" 'The big question, as I see it, is why is a baby q'qr so important? I mean, important enough for Rasalom himself to keep--"
[/INDENT]Whoah-whoah-whoah, time out! Jack? Aw, come on! :mad2: Since when does HE get to drop the One's name without...consequence? (And since nobody in the room stopped him from saying it, my guess is this truly was just an error...and hopefully not a Fatal one.)

Just something to keep in mind for the trade edits, FP. (Nice as always to see you again, by the way!)

Nice catch, Barry! I missed that completely.
Barry Lee Dejasu   07-24-2010, 10:25 AM
#3
And I was sure I would have been the...umpteenth person to have noticed. Well, even if I'm the third or seventh, glad I could help!

"...and your last thought is that you have become a noise...a thin, nameless noise among all these others...howling in the empty dark room"
--Ulver, "Nowhere/Catastrophe"
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Bluesman Mike Lindner   07-24-2010, 10:30 AM
#4
Barry Lee Dejasu Wrote:And I was sure I would have been the...umpteenth person to have noticed. Well, even if I'm the third or seventh, glad I could help!

Hmmm... maybe at that meeting, it was actually Rasalom =disguised= as Jack, seeing what his enemies were up to...:tongue:
fpw   07-24-2010, 01:29 PM
#5
I thought that was edited out.

FPW
FAQ
"It means 'Ask the next question.' Ask the next question, and the one that follows that, and the one that follows that. It's the symbol of everything humanity has ever created." Theodore Sturgeon.
Brian   07-24-2010, 06:22 PM
#6
Barry Lee Dejasu Wrote:Whoah-whoah-whoah, time out! Jack? Aw, come on! Since when does HE get to drop the One's name without...consequence? (And since nobody in the room stopped him from saying it, my guess is this truly was just an error...and hopefully not a Fatal one.)

I don't know, the way I looked at it was, Glaeken told Jack that the R guy knew he had aged and that now Jack could act against him. (Without the book in my hands, I'm just paraphrasing here.) It didn't matter any more, Rasalom was aware.

There is no wise man without fault
fpw   07-24-2010, 11:20 PM
#7
Brian Wrote:I don't know, the way I looked at it was, Glaeken told Jack that the R guy knew he had aged and that now Jack could act against him. (Without the book in my hands, I'm just paraphrasing here.) It didn't matter any more, Rasalom was aware.
Brian's right -- if that took place after R's final return from NC (after Reprisal), then it no longer matters.

FPW
FAQ
"It means 'Ask the next question.' Ask the next question, and the one that follows that, and the one that follows that. It's the symbol of everything humanity has ever created." Theodore Sturgeon.
Bluesman Mike Lindner   07-25-2010, 09:57 AM
#8
fpw Wrote:Brian's right -- if that took place after R's final return from NC (after Reprisal), then it no longer matters.

Brian never misses a clue! Wink:pBig Grin
Barry Lee Dejasu   07-25-2010, 10:41 AM
#9
But this was BEFORE that final meeting, after the post-NC discovery. This is just during one of their final meetings, before the Interweb attack, the Lady's...reaction, etc. Just something that stood out to me quite a bit.

(Finished the book, by the way - thanks again! Waiting with bated breath!)

"...and your last thought is that you have become a noise...a thin, nameless noise among all these others...howling in the empty dark room"
--Ulver, "Nowhere/Catastrophe"
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Brian   07-25-2010, 11:37 AM
#10
There is another thing I've noticed as well in the last 2 or 3 books. Jack seems to not care if he says Rasalom's name. Almost as if he wants the confrontation, sooner rather than later, as if a dare.

There is no wise man without fault
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