I posted this way back when.......
I just wanted to point out a couple of errors that I caught in Midnight Mass.
P. 94 There was an apostrophe left off of the word doin' (or the 'g' was left off).
P. 164 "...left an cavity..." should be "...left a cavity..."
P. 167 I swear I found one on this page but I can't find it now.
P. 262 I'm not sure if this is an error or not. The heading of this section is "
CAROLE...," but it seems like it is actually all told from Lacey's perspective. BTW, I love your technique of switching perspective throughout the story. I have noticed this in other novels, but have failed to mention it until now.
I have not finished the book yet, but I wanted to post these asap. Great book...so far.....