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MIDNIGHT MASS errors - fpw - 08-03-2005

The proof pages for the MM paperback will be arriving soon. I already have a lot of errors on file from Blake Dollens. If any of you spotted any errors, now's the time to let me know so I can correct them for the paperback.


MIDNIGHT MASS errors - Keith the Elder - 08-03-2005

Just the one RE Generalissomo Francisco Franco - should be dead as per SNL Weekend Update. "It's been six weeks and Generalissimo Francisco Franco is still critically dead"


MIDNIGHT MASS errors - jimbow8 - 08-03-2005

I posted this way back when.......


I just wanted to point out a couple of errors that I caught in Midnight Mass.

P. 94 There was an apostrophe left off of the word doin' (or the 'g' was left off).

P. 164 "...left an cavity..." should be "...left a cavity..."

P. 167 I swear I found one on this page but I can't find it now. Big Grin

P. 262 I'm not sure if this is an error or not. The heading of this section is "CAROLE...," but it seems like it is actually all told from Lacey's perspective. BTW, I love your technique of switching perspective throughout the story. I have noticed this in other novels, but have failed to mention it until now.

I have not finished the book yet, but I wanted to post these asap. Great book...so far..... Wink Big Grin


MIDNIGHT MASS errors - Biggles - 08-03-2005

jimbow8 Wrote:I posted this way back when.......


I just wanted to point out a couple of errors that I caught in Midnight Mass.

P. 94 There was an apostrophe left off of the word doin' (or the 'g' was left off).

P. 164 "...left an cavity..." should be "...left a cavity..."

P. 167 I swear I found one on this page but I can't find it now. Big Grin

P. 262 I'm not sure if this is an error or not. The heading of this section is "CAROLE...," but it seems like it is actually all told from Lacey's perspective. BTW, I love your technique of switching perspective throughout the story. I have noticed this in other novels, but have failed to mention it until now.

I have not finished the book yet, but I wanted to post these asap. Great book...so far..... Wink Big Grin

Jim:


Page 167, First line (missing word): "...sooner or later it [was] going to end..."

Was that it?