too bad I didn't get an arc of Rakoshi so that could be fixed- I spotted the issue with timelines (cover story about Kusumk and Kolabati's parents) right away. but hmmmm, maybe if it goes to pb......
I'm a stickler for details.
I used to get arc's all the time when I was working with a literacy program funded by a local bookseller, and always filled out the comment cards. love to go back and read them later to see what revisions or edits have been made.
as for leaving in the part about showing Vicks how to check out a chocolate, it's just one of those lil skllls its fun to know- and my own daughter, bless her rotten little self, has been known to open a box of dark chocolates (which I love and she hates), pull off the bottoms and suck out the fillings. she thoughtfully puts them back into place. isn't she sweet?
Danni (who is waiting impatiently for the beacon announcement...)