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beowulf   12-07-2007, 12:56 PM
#11
bones weep tedium Wrote:Hey all!

Just back online and look what's happened!! :eek:

I couldnt believe it when I saw FPW had left a comment on me blog . . . and to get crit from The Big Dog himself has made my month.

Thanks v much for the nice comments guys, will update soon! Wink

Make it sooner rather than later!! The comic was really good stuff, I think Jack looks spot on!

"Fate has me highly skilled and loaded with talent."
bones weep tedium   12-07-2007, 01:41 PM
#12
Here's the finished 15 pages of the 26 I have pencilled. They're roughly 80% finished: I have to go back and sort out some spazzy justification issues on the captions and touch up a couple of diffrerent panels --- any comments/crits would be greatly appreciated!

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I accidentally dropped a load of worthless change in the street. I was going to just leave it there but a burly policeman lumbered towards me and said, "You'd better pick that up, son."

I hate coppers.

[Image: smile-test.gif]"DEMOCRACY IS TWO WOLVES AND A LAMB VOTING ON WHAT TO HAVE FOR LUNCH.
LIBERTY IS A WELL-ARMED LAMB CONTESTING THE VOTE."
Dave F   12-07-2007, 03:30 PM
#13
I think it's great.

Have to agree the woman is a bit butch, but I can't remember the description in the book

Is this a project for your art course or a labour of love?

The artist formally known as Britfan
Kenji   12-07-2007, 05:21 PM
#14
bones weep tedium Wrote:Here's the finished 15 pages of the 26 I have pencilled. They're roughly 80% finished: I have to go back and sort out some spazzy justification issues on the captions and touch up a couple of diffrerent panels --- any comments/crits would be greatly appreciated!

Awesome! Keep workin', bones! I'm looking forward to next pages. Big Grin
Scott Miller   12-07-2007, 06:21 PM
#15
Put me down for the next issue; great looking stuff Bones.

Scott

Jesus died for your sins, get your money's worth. Chad Daniels
XiaoYu   12-08-2007, 12:45 AM
#16
Fantastic! This scene remains one of my favorite in the series and it's awesome seeing it as well as reading it.

My only thing is what's already been mentioned: the somewhat butch Beth.

I'm curious what you're using. Photoshop and Wacom? I'm envious of your backgrounds and your ease of people painting.

More! More!

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bones weep tedium   12-08-2007, 01:11 PM
#17
XiaoYu Wrote:Fantastic! This scene remains one of my favorite in the series and it's awesome seeing it as well as reading it.

My only thing is what's already been mentioned: the somewhat butch Beth.

I'm curious what you're using. Photoshop and Wacom? I'm envious of your backgrounds and your ease of people painting.

More! More!

Yep, I pencil the pages first, and then scan them into Potatoshop CS2 and paint them with a graphics tablet.

Thanks very much to everyone's kind comments, am definitely going to go back and touch up Beth (if you know what I mean . . . Wink ) but am anxious to keep going for a while yet. Jack's about to leap into action any minute now . . . . ! ! ! !

Will update as soon as I can Smile


I accidentally dropped a load of worthless change in the street. I was going to just leave it there but a burly policeman lumbered towards me and said, "You'd better pick that up, son."

I hate coppers.

[Image: smile-test.gif]"DEMOCRACY IS TWO WOLVES AND A LAMB VOTING ON WHAT TO HAVE FOR LUNCH.
LIBERTY IS A WELL-ARMED LAMB CONTESTING THE VOTE."
Sigokat   12-08-2007, 01:33 PM
#18
These comics are cool as hell, Bones!

I wish you hadn't left off where you did because just as I was hoping to see jack get in on the action there was no more...Sad

Hope to see some more of this soon...great work!

Major K

"He guards the sleep of his pauper master as if he were a Prince." George Graham Vest

"We are alone, absolutely alone on this chance planet: and, amid all the forms of life that surround us, not one, excepting the dog, has made an alliance with us." - Maurice Maeterlinck
bones weep tedium   01-25-2008, 07:28 AM
#19
logo for the comic:

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what do we think? :confused:

Have suspended work on the comic for at least the next couple of weeks; have got to write my 5000word dissertation.


I accidentally dropped a load of worthless change in the street. I was going to just leave it there but a burly policeman lumbered towards me and said, "You'd better pick that up, son."

I hate coppers.

[Image: smile-test.gif]"DEMOCRACY IS TWO WOLVES AND A LAMB VOTING ON WHAT TO HAVE FOR LUNCH.
LIBERTY IS A WELL-ARMED LAMB CONTESTING THE VOTE."
fpw   01-25-2008, 11:45 AM
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bones weep tedium Wrote:logo for the comic:

[SIZE="3"]The inspection-plate pattern background fits perfectly with the story.[/SIZE]

FPW
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