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GeraldRice   11-03-2011, 02:59 PM
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I loved Source Code. The Adjustment Bureau had a cop-out of an ending. I could have written a better ending. I actually even thought of one.

They passed an old woman who was just opening the door of a brown Cadillac. An old man was already sitting in the passenger seat. The car had a personalized plate with the letters “J-U-S-P-R-A-Y”.
“That stuff work?” Israel said to her.
“‘Scuse me?” the little old woman said, clutching her keys.
“The spray. Does it keep them away?”
“Keep who away?” She looked confused.
“I gotcha.” Israel gave her a conspiratorial wink.

www.feelmyghost.webs.com
Brian   11-03-2011, 07:06 PM
#12
GeraldRice Wrote:I loved Source Code. The Adjustment Bureau had a cop-out of an ending. I could have written a better ending. I actually even thought of one.

You didn't like [SPOILER]the story being rewritten for them?[/SPOILER]

There is no wise man without fault
GeraldRice   11-10-2011, 03:35 PM
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Brian Wrote:You didn't like [SPOILER]the story being rewritten for them?[/SPOILER]

No because [SPOILER]if the story just got rewritten for them then why wouldn't 'God' just rewrite it from the start and save everyone time and headache?[/SPOILER]

They passed an old woman who was just opening the door of a brown Cadillac. An old man was already sitting in the passenger seat. The car had a personalized plate with the letters “J-U-S-P-R-A-Y”.
“That stuff work?” Israel said to her.
“‘Scuse me?” the little old woman said, clutching her keys.
“The spray. Does it keep them away?”
“Keep who away?” She looked confused.
“I gotcha.” Israel gave her a conspiratorial wink.

www.feelmyghost.webs.com
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