Susan Wrote:Hi all,
Me again. I have 3 finalists for design that goes on the RJ products. I am willing to change these or combine them, etc. Please post your feedback here. Tell me what you like, don't like or even come up with a new idea.
They're all great, but I like number three best. Even though it kinda, sorta, reminds me of Jurassic Park III.
Ken V.
Susan Wrote:Proportions off on #1? I'm cornfused. It's the Jack silhouette up close and the NY skyline behind it.
Susan
The proportions are fine. It's the slashes that are backward, and not long enough.
(They go from HIS left shoulder to his right ribs.) Also wondering if you think that suitcase ought to be removed from his left hand to narrow the lower portion of the silhouette a bit. It looks just a bit too triangular to me.
Ken - ducking and running - V.
I love all three. If I had to pick, I'd say I like #1 best.
I think I'd pick #1. Even though I still think there is something strange about the silhouette. It looks to me like Jack has either a toothpick neck or he's wearing a sweater with a giant neck hole.
Ken Valentine Wrote:The proportions are fine. It's the slashes that are backward, and not long enough.
Also wondering if you think that suitcase ought to be removed from his left hand to narrow the lower portion of the silhouette a bit. It looks just a bit too triangular to me.
Ken - ducking and running - V.
LOL! Nice catch, Ken! I was aware of the slash problem. I intend to fix it. I'll look into the suitcase (if that's what that is) issue as well.
Susan
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DaveStrorm Wrote:I think I'd pick #1. Even though I still think there is something strange about the silhouette. It looks to me like Jack has either a toothpick neck or he's wearing a sweater with a giant neck hole.
Oh my. I didn't design the Jack silhouette, so I can't help you there!
Susan
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A dreamer is one who can only find his way by moonlight, and his punishment is that he sees the dawn before the rest of the world. ~ Oscar Wilde
Insanity in individuals is something rare -- but in groups, parties, nations, and epochs it is the rule.~Nietzche
Insanity in individuals is something rare -- but in groups, parties, nations, and epochs it is the rule.~Nietzche
Susan Wrote:Hi all,
Me again. I have 3 finalists for design that goes on the RJ products. I am willing to change these or combine them, etc. Please post your feedback here. Tell me what you like, don't like or even come up with a new idea.
Hey Susan. I like all of three. But #1 is best.
If you change something, #1 + Rakoshi's eyes and talons behind Jack. That would be cool.
Susan Wrote:LOL! Nice catch, Ken! I was aware of the slash problem. I intend to fix it. I'll look into the suitcase (if that's what that is) issue as well.
Susan
Well, when you click onto welcome and go through the "when all else fails" intro, look at the silhouette of Jack. Doesn't it look like he has a suitcase in his left hand? And doesn't it look like Samsonite?
Sometimes I wish my run-away imagination would just keep on running . . . and leave me behind.
Ken V.
P.S. The slashes going diagonally from Jacks left to right indicates that Scarlip is right handed . . . doncha think?
This post was last modified: 07-29-2004, 05:50 PM by Ken Valentine.
Susan Wrote:Oh my. I didn't design the Jack silhouette, so I can't help you there!
Susan
Come on! Admit it! You're the mysterious designer behind the silhouette.
Actually, I noticed that the first time I saw it on a book jacket. To paraphrase Elaine from Seinfeld, he looks like a walking candy apple. I still like it, I just think his neck is too thin or something.
Susan Wrote:Proportions off on #1? I'm cornfused. It's the Jack silhouette up close and the NY skyline behind it.The head looks too small.
Susan
The most merciful thing in the world, I think, is the inability of the human mind to correlate all its contents. ... The piecing together of dissociated knowledge will open up such terrifying vistas of reality, and of our frightful position therein, that we shall either go mad from the revelation or flee from the light into the peace and safety of a new dark age.
~ Howard Phillips Lovecraft