The Bottom Down

phoenix rising 10-17-2007, 12:03 PM

#11

webby Wrote:I like both of these. I have no better ideas. Good ones, Phoenix.

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Susan 10-17-2007, 03:21 PM

#12

I like Bottom Down (without the "the") or Keith's Hard Problem. Hehehe.

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Scott Miller 10-18-2007, 01:08 PM

#13

A spin on Keith's suggestion- A Prickly Problem or Predictament

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Paul R 10-19-2007, 05:42 AM

#14

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Auskar 10-19-2007, 06:21 AM

#15

Marc B. Wrote:Synopsis: Jason is too embarrassed to go to a hospital to get a stuck cock ring removed so, instead, he goes to his bartender friend. But the bartender has other plans because Jason is dating his younger sister and has gotten her addicted to heroine.

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GeraldRice 10-19-2007, 07:24 AM

#16

How about simply "Dick" because, well, this guy seems sort of a dick and the er, double entendre.

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bones weep tedium 10-22-2007, 06:08 AM

#17

Cock-A-Doodle-DON'T

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Marc 10-25-2007, 12:47 PM

#18

I just got word from the competition that our short film "The Bottom Down" has been deemed too graphic and needs a new cut. I'm being censored! :p

I don't know why but it's kind of cool that we're being censored. Now I can have a director's cut!

phoenix rising 10-25-2007, 02:05 PM

#19

Marc B. Wrote:I just got word from the competition that our short film "The Bottom Down" has been deemed too graphic and needs a new cut. I'm being censored! :p

I don't know why but it's kind of cool that we're being censored. Now I can have a director's cut!

Really?!?!?! Now I have to see it!!!! (the original uncut version of course) So did you settle on a name?

Marc 10-25-2007, 02:14 PM

#20

phoenix rising Wrote:Really?!?!?! Now I have to see it!!!! (the original uncut version of course) So did you settle on a name?

I'm sticking with "The Bottom Down". I did polls on two other forums and most people liked it so I decided to leave it. There were some good suggestions though.

I'll let you know when the uncensored version is posted.