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jjmcculloch   04-14-2011, 09:14 PM
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I'm very curious how Jack builds his skills (shooting, fighting, explosives, lockpicking and other elements of badassness).
Ken Valentine   04-14-2011, 09:50 PM
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jjmcculloch Wrote:I'm very curious how Jack builds his skills (shooting, fighting, explosives, lockpicking and other elements of badassness).
For lock-picking, read the Young Adult books. Especially the last one: Secret Vengance.

Ken V.
crlovel   04-28-2011, 07:54 AM
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Say, ummm...maybe if you post the chapters in here as you write them, we could help you out? Wink
Bluesman Mike Lindner   04-28-2011, 01:36 PM
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Ah ain't certainly not gonna tell Paul how to fictioneer, but this ah-deer just slapped me upside mah damn haid...

Young Jack moves to the Big Town. Doing the work he was born to do. Making a little name for himself. "Jeff, I heard about this guy... He maybe can help you. He don't work for cheap, but... You got nothing left, right?"

And Jack, still learning the ropes, makes a mistake that leaves his customer even worse off.

Just a thought.
Srem   04-28-2011, 09:05 PM
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Bluesman Mike Lindner Wrote:Ah ain't certainly not gonna tell Paul how to fictioneer, but this ah-deer just slapped me upside mah damn haid...

Young Jack moves to the Big Town. Doing the work he was born to do. Making a little name for himself. "Jeff, I heard about this guy... He maybe can help you. He don't work for cheap, but... You got nothing left, right?"

And Jack, still learning the ropes, makes a mistake that leaves his customer even worse off.

Just a thought.

Agreed; learning from his own mistakes will have made him into the overly-cautious, see-it-from-all-angles fix-it-man that he has become today.

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