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Continuity in Dark At the End/ Reprisal or "How did R forget how to drive?" - madh0us3 - 02-10-2012
Very nice, a "quick fix" lol.
Continuity in Dark At the End/ Reprisal or "How did R forget how to drive?" - Dave - 02-10-2012
fpw Wrote:Just formatted the ms for the international ebook (I retain all those rights) and made a simple change:I'll be sure to update the Gauntlet edition I have with black biro and tipex
But the first thing to do was remove himself as far from here as possible. He’d need the car for that. He’d only recently leaned how to drive. He’d left home as a child – a very wealthy child who could afford a chauffeur – and so he’d never had a need until his sojourn in North Carolina. But he’d never driven in snow.
How hard could it be? The roads were filled with idiots.
The same will go into the US paperback.
Continuity in Dark At the End/ Reprisal or "How did R forget how to drive?" - Marc - 02-10-2012
fpw Wrote:But the first thing to do was remove himself as far from here as possible. He’d need the car for that. He’d only recently leaned how to drive. He’d left home as a child – a very wealthy child who could afford a chauffeur – and so he’d never had a need until his sojourn in North Carolina. But he’d never driven in snow.
How hard could it be? The roads were filled with idiots.
Please tell me you didn't write "He’d only recently leaned how to drive." :p
Continuity in Dark At the End/ Reprisal or "How did R forget how to drive?" - Chukapi - 02-10-2012
fpw Wrote:Just formatted the ms for the international ebook (I retain all those rights) and made a simple change:
But the first thing to do was remove himself as far from here as possible. He’d need the car for that. He’d only recently leaned how to drive. He’d left home as a child – a very wealthy child who could afford a chauffeur – and so he’d never had a need until his sojourn in North Carolina. But he’d never driven in snow.
How hard could it be? The roads were filled with idiots.
The same will go into the US paperback.
See, I would think the simplest fix would be to ask the question: with the house blowing up around him, the chauffeur dead - where are the car keys???
Continuity in Dark At the End/ Reprisal or "How did R forget how to drive?" - fpw - 02-11-2012
Marc Wrote:Please tell me you didn't write "He’d only recently leaned how to drive." :p
:rain: That's why I need proof readers.